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On 5-26-2011, I was honored with a Daily Literature Deviation for this piece of poetry. It is featured in news.deviantart.com/article/15… amongst other beautiful pieces of literary works of art.

Thank you very much to admins at :icondailylitdeviations: and to :iconapple-dark: for featuring this piece. I am so very grateful.

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Published by Revolt Daily revoltdaily.org/poetry-sarah-h… along with some of my other poems on July 12, 2012.


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:iconyadiyada27:
yadiyada27 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014
:clap: A great poem, full of depth. 
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014
Thank you. :)
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Zaphod-Beeblebrox58 Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
Like the last stanza a lot, it draws all of your thoughts together and remains vague enough to be thought provoking.

Is the color imagery intentional?
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
Thank you for the comment.   And yes, the color imagery is intentional.  I hate pink. :)
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:iconzaphod-beeblebrox58:
Zaphod-Beeblebrox58 Featured By Owner May 19, 2014
I thought there was a link between the pink panties and the blood on the tile... ;)
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
It really can mean whatever you see it as meaning.  The meaning lies in the minds of the readers, despite what I intend when I write it. :)  I think that's the beauty of poetry.
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:iconzaphod-beeblebrox58:
Zaphod-Beeblebrox58 Featured By Owner May 22, 2014
Well, that is the coolest part of writing..
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
Absolutely.
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:iconwordeea:
wordeea Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
that last stanza was just awesome.
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
Thank you. :) I'm getting it tattooed on my side with a feather quill pen. :)

Thanks for faving it. :hug:
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:iconwordeea:
wordeea Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
nice!!

i'm getting (eventually) un phoenix on my side
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
Awesome!
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BeyondJen Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
There's something about your words...they're like a mirror shoved in front of us, forcing us to take note of the things we're probably trying to hide. The madness. How interesting that it's always there, at least to some degree, in everything. One only needs to be pushed far enough to experience it.

This piece brought quite a few people to the forefront of my mind. I saw some of myself in there too. But I've never been one to run away from such things. There's more power in harnessing the madness than trying to hide under it. :nod:

I really especially like the third stanza. Gosh, what honesty it packs!

And the first two lines of the last stanza?! Yes! Definitely, yes!
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner May 16, 2012
"There's more power in harnessing the madness than trying to hide under it."

I absolutely agree. :)

"There's something about your words...they're like a mirror shoved in front of us, forcing us to take note of the things we're probably trying to hide."

I think that is the most accurate description yet of my work. Thank you for that. :)

Thank you for the thoughtful commentary on this piece. It's among my personal favorites, perhaps because it's the most honest. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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artistic-foolishness Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I think I should remind you that you're amazing.






K'bye. I'm gonna have a friggin' bubble bath.
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011
You're a sweetie :)
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:iconartistic-foolishness:
artistic-foolishness Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
And you're gorgeous, love. :P
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011
Awww! Thank you. :)
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artistic-foolishness Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
No need for thanks(:
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011
:)
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TheMadMulatto Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
Wow, babe. YES! It's certainly something that shows progression... I think it's the references like

"...unendung hours of noon".

That's a "wait... what?"

and from there you can't help but know EXACTLY that feeling as much as it doesn't make sense.
And that's the point.

Frustration always comes in an arguable color with creative bad mathematics.
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SEH-art Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
And that, my dear, is madness. ;) Last year was a baaad year. But it did wonders for my writing. If only I were having such a year again this year. Not so much.

I'm glad you're liking this one. Thanks you.
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:iconthemadmulatto:
TheMadMulatto Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011
Yeah, man! :worship:
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011
;)
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teresa-lynn Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2011
:)
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Sneds Featured By Owner May 26, 2011
Congratulations! :iconbonklers:
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner May 26, 2011
Thank you! :)
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alunasa Featured By Owner May 26, 2011
I didn't know what to expect from this piece because of that first line. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem and have experienced some moments in my own life that remind me of this. Congratulations on a well deserved DLD.
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SEH-art Featured By Owner May 26, 2011
Thank you so very much. The first line makes most people say "what the...?" and then they want to finish just to find out what it's about. lol! The last line hits upside the head and leaves them with a concussion.

That's exactly what poetry should do. Blunt force trauma you never see coming. Oh yeah. ;p

Thanks for the fave!
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alunasa Featured By Owner May 26, 2011
You're welcome.
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:iconbark:
Bark Featured By Owner May 26, 2011  Professional Writer
Congratulations on the DLD! :D
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SEH-art Featured By Owner May 26, 2011
Thank you! I'm in a stupor of humbled surprise. This has been quite a spree of honors for me this time around on DA. I feel very blessed...and content.
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner May 26, 2011
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here [link]
Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner May 26, 2011
Thank you so very much. I am incredibly honored.
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MyDaysOfInsanity Featured By Owner May 19, 2011  Student Writer
This is such an incredible poem, for my poetry class every Friday we have an assignment to share 3 poems we liked over the week and i was wondering if i could show yours? This is incredible by the way :)
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner May 20, 2011
Is this for a college course or high school course? I don't mind you showing my work. This is the second one you've chosen to share with your class. Please remember to use my real name when presenting my work, though. That's all I ask. Thank you. :)
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MyDaysOfInsanity Featured By Owner May 20, 2011  Student Writer
i did already ask you, but that's because you're an amazing writer, and yeah i used your name :)
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
Thank you dear.

Still wondering if this is for college or high school. I'm curious. I took poetry in both and loved it. :) You're bringing back memories.
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MyDaysOfInsanity Featured By Owner May 21, 2011  Student Writer
oh haha sorry, its for high school
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner May 22, 2011
That's ok. :) Enjoy your class. If you wish to present anything else, do as you've done so far, and let me know in advance. Thank you.
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MyDaysOfInsanity Featured By Owner May 22, 2011  Student Writer
i will, thanks!
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner May 24, 2011
:)
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Dionysius7 Featured By Owner May 19, 2011
Fuck this world. You're all insane.
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner May 20, 2011
Ok then.
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Paddyeahh Featured By Owner May 18, 2011  Student Writer
I love it.
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner May 18, 2011
Wonderful. Thank you for faving.
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Paddyeahh Featured By Owner May 18, 2011  Student Writer
My pleasure.
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All-My-Darkness Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2011
Some unfulfilled part shouts loud here

Listen or I will bleed

Blood and words

Things are too easy
and too hard

And worst off
sometimes
Dull
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:iconseh-art:
SEH-art Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2011
Dull like the razor
I use to seethe
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